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A_Desert_Guy
A_Desert_GuyLv142yr
2022-08-08 03:28

I love how the mc is shown to be a complete sociopath but her attitude and how she acts makes you love her even with her flaws. The story is fantastic and the world in my opinion is pretty well done. My only dislike so far is how some characters descriptions are sometimes lacking but otherwise a great story Question for the author: is there going to be romance with the main character (I won’t drop if your thinking that I’m fine with either) Love your story ;)

I must save the world, but I can't kill anyone.

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268 Chs

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Thanks for all your chapter comments and the warm review! As for the romance, there'll be... cynical romance. that's the best way i can describe it

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