A_Desert_Guy

Is baby!

That sounds awesome! Great for her I’m currently stuck in the earth labyrinth arc (I had to reread earlier since I lost track of the characters!) and I’ve even made a kirena kin playlist on Spotify to get me into the mood to read it! (I can link it if you want ;) ) I just want to say I’m sorry for how aggressive my original review was I have a habit of snowballing when I write things so things that are originally minor critiques become “bigger deals” than they need to be! I really love how you grow each character and even how you hint at future plot points in ways that don’t feel forced or rushed to me. When you first hinted at the virtues it felt really natural it felt just like all the other interludes yet it really brought the future into an intriguing light!

Oh my God these commenters have no media literacy if he literally states he dosent want to lose any of himself and the goddess claims this debauchery filled reincarnation will change him and block him out of reincarnation with memories then he will still eventually lose himself and be reincarnated and go through the meat grinder changing nothing in the long run! Man you all just nitpick

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Technically Bull Shit that’s why I found it funny

Yeah I’m sorry for just venting here that’s never good for feedback anyways! I get that though character growth is a thing and there needs to be setbacks for it to happen I understand but sometimes I wonder if the down spiral is too much? But anyway I do love you book the skills, the worlds story, and the massive world you have made is really interesting and not to common!

This could be fun 🤩

Cool cool cool not that I won’t read but sometimes when the steal is very vindictive or sadistic it sometimes takes away my enjoyment of the story! Not that I wouldent read but I might skim them tbh. But with the way you described the demon world the demons on both sides might want this? Anyways I’m a sucker for consensual NTR guilty pleasure

Awesome biginner chapter! Loved the whole thing tbh! I have a quick question though what kind of netori will there be? Like futa demon cheating with her or is out mc a futa tbh I could be cool either way but I have one concern will there be gloating? If there is it might turn me away from the book to be honest :( But it is your book with your motives and take anything i say with a grain of salt! Still loved the chapter! <3

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule