Review Detail of Eldritch_Umbra in Our Painful Love

The premise is interesting, even if it's been done many times before. While the writing quality is passable, the way the dialogue is written is not good. Dialogue is written in quotation mark("x")s, not with a -(dash?). For example: "The boat is blue." (This is correct) -The boat is blue. (This is incorrect.) Next, I struggled to actually get invested in the story. This may just be an issue on my part (It very well could be) but I never really got a feeling for what type of person Yu Bin is. I know she makes poor choices, but that's really it. 3/5