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2024-06-23 10:30

When i started reading the ist few chapters are making me excited but for some reason i decided to check the last chapter ending to make sure its worth my time and boy! Im glad i did cos the ending is horrible and disappointing as theres no point reading the rest.i dont know if theres a continuation of these story but last chapter is definitely not what readers like me would like to encounter.

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