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DeKinLv12yr
2022-06-30 18:39

I only read the first chapter but Your writing style is very unique and immersive I also didn’t notice any serious grammatical errors I feel like you could’ve done just a tad bit better at the beginning very confusing for abit. Overall pretty good tho

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EmmalineFadaini
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Thank you. She had an argument with the male lead in the beginning and the flashbacks were the story about her fiance and how they broke up before she met the male lead.

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