Review Detail of bear_Freak_2422 in GodFather System: All my kids are weird

Item: GodFather System: All my kids are weird
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

bear_Freak_2422Lv31yrbear_Freak_2422

the idea of the novel is good and grammar is also nice, it's just that the flow of reading breaks sometimes due to the wording. overall I like it.[img=recommend]

GodFather System: All my kids are weird

World_Simulator

Liked by 1 people

Replies2

World_SimulatorAuthorWorld_Simulator

thank you for you review.(๑¯◡¯๑)

1yr

bear_Freak_2422Lv3bear_Freak_2422

also I feel like that the more I know about the mc the more I'll get immersed in the novel. maybe an auxiliary chapter about the characters info or a side chapter that explains his sickness. (if it hasn't been explained in the novel. I haven't read above 50 chapters yet).

1yr