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Drewseffi
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2024-08-09 00:54

Super enjoyable read, if anyone stumbles across this novel and even has an inkling of intrigue, they should 100% give it a shot. Minor grammatical errors that don’t affect the reading quality much at all, but still noticeable sometimes. MC is enjoyable as he is navigating the world trying to achieve his goals, all the while constantly battling himself trying to balance ruthlessness and compassion. I especially appreciate that his progress isn’t linear, there’s plenty he is learning as he goes and information that was previously thought to be correct that is then proved wrong. The world building is fun, nothing too fleshed out detail wise, but also surprisingly consistent in terms of the details provided while the MC is in each location. It’s kind of a funny balance that works simply because (as previously stated) of the consistency so it feels like you’re given a small but intriguing picture to look at. The side characters are great, each one displays their own unique personality and emotions that stay remarkably consistent throughout the story while also not remaining stagnant. The ONLY true problem with this story in my eyes, is simply the update consistency, or rather, lack there of. I understand the authors plight as he has stated recently that life hasn’t been the most fortunate as of late. But, that doesn’t mean I’m going to artificially inflate the rating for updating stability. If the author can regain consistency in uploading then I’ll gladly change my review as I highly respect the time and dedication that has gone into this story and greatly appreciate the privilege of reading it. Overall in my personal opinion; Writing Quality; 5/5 (occasional minor errors shouldn’t weigh too heavily) Updating Stability 2/5 (not a 1 simply because it used to be pretty consistent) Story Development 5/5 (enjoyable amount of mini arcs and world navigation) Character Design 5/5 (Enjoyable MC and side characters, nobody is one dimensional) World Background 5/5 (If I went off of details of the main areas in the story it’d be lower but I’m factoring in the additional characteristics the author has included as well as the inclusion of cultural details and differences)

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KojiSan
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oh yeah i dont deserve 5/5 in update schedule, no sarcasm there btw... but thanks for am actually 5/5 review mate! n.n .. and heres a kitty for u!

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Iceyunderground
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Ok, so, I've currently read the latest chapter (ch 38 Push and Pull) and I'll be giving my review based on that progress. Just to note, I'm no professional reviewer or anything like that, just a guy who decided to give my two cents about something he liked reading. Writing Quality: 5/5 I couldn't spot anything that made me go, "Oh, that's miss spelled" or "This sentence makes no sense". Either I'm just too blind or it's really just that good. Stability of Updates: 4/5 I started reading this when 38 chapters were already released. So I have yet to experience a 'wait time'. It'd feel unfair if I were to give a 5/5 though. Story Development: 5/5 I think this is being done very well, slow, but still very well. At no point in time did I ever feel any chapter was 'filler'. The overall pacing, though slow, is always in constant motion. If you can't tell yet, if you don't enjoy novels that take their time, then you'll probably want to pass on this one. Character Design: 5/5 Okay, so here is where ... more than a few complaints from other readers have originated from, but I'll cover that in the overview part. The side characters or any character that's not the MC are all very enjoyable to read about. I can truly say that I'd enjoy reading a sort of side content about Lei (or Jackie) and Kaliya during that 3 year time skip. The MC is .... feels... real to me. Not really sure how else to describe that, it's a good thing that's for sure though. World Background: 5/5 Things feel very fluid and consistent with how the world is progressing and reacting. Again, it just feels good and nice with nothing really negative standing out. Overview: Ok then, so, it's a good novel. Plain and simple, it's fun, engaging, I wanted to just keep reading it and not stop... until I had to. A big complaint I've seen from other comments is that the MC isn't the real Madara or that the story is too slow. Truthfully, those comments are correct, but that's not a bad thing though. No, in fact it's a great thing. The Madara in this novel isn't the 'Real Madara', but he's still very strong.... borderline OP. I only say borderline OP cause it's doubtful he'd be able to handle the BIG 'foes' in the spirit realm... for now. Not too sure if that's something that'll change in the future or if it's something that even needs to be changed. At the moment, Madara is his own character unique to the novel, not some overt-OP demi-ninja-god that most people might be used to. That's a great thing though, cause that ties into why the novel feels 'slow'. Gotta remember, this is the ATLA (Avatar: The Last Airbender) world, this is a rather small-low-tier power ceiling world. If Madara WAS full power, he'd bulldoze practically anything & everything in this world, not something that'd be too exciting for every novel. The story goes 'slow', but it gets all those details that are easily missed by many people. Something I feel actually helps to push this novel into a higher tier of novel, if that's even a thing. Look, I feel I've been going on a bit too long here, so I'll just say it's a good novel. Give it a try, see if you like it, no it's not the OP Madara you might be expecting but he's still a fantastic character. I'll be looking forward to reading more. I'll be sure to update/edit this review as more chapters get released to keep it consistent.

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