Review Detail of ssyffix in Flame_

Pretty dang good, yo. It got better as you progressed. I had a pretty lol experience because each character, to me, I either LOVED or HATED. Overall tho, I’ve been enjoying thus far. The pacing is pretty good. I really liked how we just got into the story in a relatively quick manner, and not taking sooooo long to get to the stuff we wanted. You will lol a couple times with how the MC will handle a situation😂. Was also impressed with how symbols were used with intention. for example, the color schemes of characters seem to have a purpose to them. Fun story all around. Enjoying it thus far. The only qualm id have, for the purpose of the review, is that sometimes I felt like paragraphs were waaay too long. Not that this is an issue though.. I’m just used to reading light novels with much shorter paragraphs. Looking forward a to seeing how this story goes.