Review Detail of DarkestCalling in Login Before Others: Stone Age

I don't even know where to start I mean I guess it's your standard paid novel it's fairly good quality but has the semi standard issue of plot holes I mean it's supposed to be a regression vrmmorpg yet after he hit level 10 suddenly no leveling not skills no farming ect ect he just suddenly starts pulling stuff out of no where because of his future knowledge yet all the resources needed to create these things arent mentioned he doesnt go searching for them it's just suddenly I already have all the items to create this or this barren valley with nothing in it take some soldier go for a walk find the hidden forest of night that has the ultra sss diamond grade rainbow mystic moonstone that's even super rare late game I'm exaggerating but that's how it comes off also he supposedly logged in 2 months before even the beta testers can log in yet only a week or so seems to pass before its beta log in day overall author seemed to spew chapters out as fast as possible and didn't make sure he wasnt contradicting himself or forgetting things and it shows