I'll be regularly checking to see if it disappears again and repost 👍

since my review got deleted rating drops to 1 ⭐ if author can't take legitimate criticism on it then don't really care I will post pics of my review though

I honestly don't understand why they just didn't go alone 😂 it's not like everyone was going with a date

hmmm tbh I would say the villager method works because they are all sentient species if your summoning people who died in Minecraft world some inherent loyalty for the one who gave you the chance makes sense as far as I know none of them are technically inherently evil or something but maybe have it a little looser as in their loyal but not to the point of oath of fealty kind of loyal but he could also earn it in various ways such as reasources or something so basically if he summons them they won't attack him but if it gets to the point they don't enjoy working for him or something they might desire to leave

what are you talking about dothraki women ride horses even while pregnant up until she's literally about to pop unless camped they will give birth in one of the carts

ikr that's like what immediately pops to mind when you read that question 😂

shhhh we don't talk about stories that totally never happened because some comic artist seems to have a ntr fetish (seriously it's ridiculous it you actually dig through it it's like almost every love interest has at least one storyline where she cheats) I think there is actually less storylines where one of the guys cheat except for the heros who have playboy characteristics and such

there is actually a few of these they just aren't major comic book characters I know for sure there is a few versions of sun wukong

that's iron man ? Hank Pym ? and pretty sure a few others

sorry I always forget comments don't space properly (idio)(synergy)(memoir)(legacy)

Idio short for idiomatic he is the sum of all who are a part of him Synergy to describe how all of it comes together to create something more memoir legacy he's what's behind when they pass on a few off the top of my head

Honestly I really wanted to like this story sure it might have quickly become a op wish fulfillment story but it was interesting and had alot of potential but the authors writing style and skill quickly dragged my interest to a river and drowned it without any remorse or attempt to change my mind so let's break it down Writing Quality: 1⭐ honestly this is a shame cause author doesn't have any major issues here except in to major glaring areas 1 word filler dear god the word filler almost every chapter be it 2k words to 5k almost consistently is it completely filled with over the top thick verbose flowery and repetitive wording Jon building a city? 3 times in one chapter will he repeat about them all coming together to build it and how they come to respect understand and value one another etc etc then there will be mentions of everyone working together at least once more every chapter dear god 2 dear god the amount of talent the author has to use said word filler to say nothing at all insert talking strategy? 500 descriptive words highlight determination resolve etc etc insert intricate and meticulous planning then battle which is honestly at least decent for a fight scene City planning with the dwarves ? basically boils down to Jon saying I want it big sturdy long lasting and ecologically sustainable dwarves? eat it up like he just spat advanced engineering intricate city planning and detailed plans to make it environmentally friendly and inclusive including blueprints and diagrams all while all he said was sturdy strong long lasting and sustainable it's ridiculous Story Development: 2 ⭐ I honestly don't really know how to put it but development wise my biggest issue is how everything is just working basically cause author says so theres so many areas of plot holes or bad description of dialogue where it just seems to work out also I really wanted to give a 1 star here just cause of how salty I am of garbage filler I choked down hoping this story got better and the last several chapters of thousands and thousands of word filler just to get minimal description of plot progress has me feeling some kind of way Character Design: 2 ⭐I don't really know how to put this but all the characters basically feel like 1 dimensional there's no real true character interaction and depth past the start of the story in the beginning it was better but as it progressed they just feel hollow and bland Updating Stability: 3⭐I give it 3 stars because for the most part it's regularly updated I took 1 star cause there isn't a schedule and 1 more cause there were a few times it stalled and I'm salty enough about reading a new chapter with thousands of words and only getting like 500 maybe 1000 of actual chapter Overall I would not recommend the more I read the more annoyed I got each new chapter the filler is one thing but it's like the further author got into the story the less he tried to actually give details it's one thing if I have to skim but it's a completely different ballgame when it amounts to vaguely saying alot describing little honestly if someone rewrote this and slashed roughly 1/2 - 2/3 of the story just getting rid of the filler it would be far more entertaining

I accept it cause Ned basically wasn't raised on northern beliefs almost all of his formative years were spent in the vale I wouldn't doubt his schooling had nothing to do with the old gods and had far more faith of the seven influence in his life he probably saw it as nothing major to let his wife have a small Sept to pray at I do agree that it was pretty stupid especially letting his wife have complete reign to school their children in the faith I'm surprised he didn't have any advisors tell him it was a bad idea

akeno actually spent time homeless and running around she got by using her basic priestess skills to earn alittle money if I remember correctly one of the people had a contract with the Gregory and notified them of her kiba and gasper idk but it wouldnt exactly be impossible for devil's to have spies or informants and they both didn't get away cleanly or quietly koneko if I remember was kuroka leaving her to be found can't remember if she left her near the gremory or not because she wasn't able to protect her and keep on the run As much as I like the fanon trope of her plotting issies death she was to young to plot anything with the others I think the oldest she was before issie was like preteen or early teen not exactly an age range to be plotting to be in the right spot at the right time

as far as I'm aware there should be no true engineers with the free folk sure to build a home or a shelter but no one capable of actually planning out a city castle and wall free folk build more towards nomad camps and village structure then a fully developed city Jon and Brayden are the only ones who could possibly do so and they most likely wouldn't want normal free folk type structures when they could set up better honestly most if them don't even have the skills to build a real city wall or castle sure some may have a bit of skill towards it but not the full process

pretty sure I double checked when I posted there was a chapter that mentioned 8 inch's honestly author usually doesn't mention the actual size but some of the descriptions are stupid like when he uses bigger then the girls arm she must have t Rex arms even a woman's fore arm is average around 9 inch's 7 would be far below average and disproportionate

dear God the repetition half this chapter was just some variation of saying tribes joined saw him as blessed by the gods and he's a symbol also lots of repeatedly mentioning how young he is