Review Detail of ObamaUchiha in Grinding with my Omniverse System
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i mean, i assuming he made this as a joke, because that's what this is lol, very basic idea overall nothing unique other than this mc im pretty sure is black instead of the normal which would just be white as jade stuff.... .....................................................................
Grinding with my Omniverse System
SteaIth
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bro i see your dialogue and half of what i see is memes and slang. slang doesn't necessarily mean its bad, but it means its not put together in an easily readable way that everyone understands
SteaIth:bro this ain't no joke this finna go to 60 chs+, why would u give it a bad review just for that. I'm just working on trying to get a better description.
Yeah the dialogue is kinda inspired from a multiverse fanfic I read that had 222 chs, I'm kinda getting mixed up in my head, and I promise to change that in Ch 6 and up. Also I plan on making it less much more humorous and such, so some of the serious readers can enjoy the story as well.
ObamaUchiha:bro i see your dialogue and half of what i see is memes and slang. slang doesn't necessarily mean its bad, but it means its not put together in an easily readable way that everyone understands
SteaIth:Yeah the dialogue is kinda inspired from a multiverse fanfic I read that had 222 chs, I'm kinda getting mixed up in my head, and I promise to change that in Ch 6 and up. Also I plan on making it less much more humorous and such, so some of the serious readers can enjoy the story as well.