Review Detail of Arathes in Queen of Supernatural (Will be republished)

This feels like a cutesy wish fulfilment romance from the author, lol. The grammar is mostly correct, the author obviously has a decent understanding of it all, for the most part everything flows smoothly, especially the dialogue which is well done, however there are many minor mistakes. I can confidently say these are mistakes and not just errors due to lack of understanding because the rest of the work differs greatly. Proofreading your work multiple times at different times will help eliminate these mistakes. However, the last update was over a month ago, you'll need to update more regularly if you are serious about it and want to make something of this novel.