To be honest, most aspects of the novel are done well. The only big issue is the grammer. It constantly changes from he to she, as well as a very weird use of punctuation to the point where it feels like words, or even whole sentences are missing. I can’t really comment much on update stability since the person who put this up isn’t the original author, but i suspect the updates to come in randomly with no real schedule as well. If you can handle the grammer issues and the fact that there won’t be much updates if any then the aren’t any other issues
LibraLies
Liked by 5 people
LIKE