it's a really good fanfiction. A lot of people don't like how dumb the main character is sometimes, but imagine you woke up and gain access to a huge amount of power, most people would lose a bunch of brain cells and let the power get to their heads. the author has done a good job at using that aspect towards the character's development and I think that's great. Over all a well written fan fic without any huge grammatical mistakes. Good plot development as it's not just a copy paste of the cannon, and in my opinion really good character development.Hopefully the author keeps up with the current quality of chapters and maintains a consistent update schedule as I have really high hopes for this fan fictionKeep up the good work author!!!

BARRACK BUNNY

To be honest, most aspects of the novel are done well. The only big issue is the grammer. It constantly changes from he to she, as well as a very weird use of punctuation to the point where it feels like words, or even whole sentences are missing. I can’t really comment much on update stability since the person who put this up isn’t the original author, but i suspect the updates to come in randomly with no real schedule as well. If you can handle the grammer issues and the fact that there won’t be much updates if any then the aren’t any other issues

I have read the first 25 chapters so my review is based on tHose chapters alone. So far the novel is extremely well written, the author does a really good job of providing details in a manner that doesn’t feel like it’s being rammed down your throat. Fight scenes are fairly well written and a good amount of back strong to both the character and the world is provided, though I do hope that the author provides more detail about the universe since it seems fairly interesting. Over all a really good start to a novel and I hope the author continues to release “the goods” for us peasants.

This is a really good danmanchi fan fiction. Although a little slow paced the story flows at a good rate and the author develops each character and their background very well. Keep up the good work author!!!

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