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Ouranos_Gein
Ouranos_GeinLv141yrOuranos_Gein

If I had to some it up into one word, it would be unfocused, it's constantly switching perspectives that after reading to the 10th chapter the MC appears so little he's appearances would barely fill 3 chapters

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CafeconLeche
CafeconLecheLv5CafeconLeche

es una traduccion de una novela china que leí en mtlNation, por eso se siente como novela china.

KasiCair
KasiCairLv1KasiCair

Oouf. For me, it is too Chinese to actually enjoy it, to be honest.

Sennengoroshi
SennengoroshiAuthorSennengoroshi

I like your new novel, though, sir. But while we're on the subject, what do you have against China?

KasiCair:Oouf. For me, it is too Chinese to actually enjoy it, to be honest.
Eternal_Jokr
Eternal_JokrLv3Eternal_Jokr

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Sennengoroshi:I like your new novel, though, sir. But while we're on the subject, what do you have against China?
Kotaku
KotakuLv4Kotaku

often conflicts with the Western (and Japanese) form of writing

Sennengoroshi:I like your new novel, though, sir. But while we're on the subject, what do you have against China?
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Wuxia style in a Japanese anime? Where do you normally see that combination?

Sennengoroshi:I like your new novel, though, sir. But while we're on the subject, what do you have against China?
Sennengoroshi
SennengoroshiAuthorSennengoroshi

Interesting...I just realized that you read a certain Naruto fic with a certain cheat called Pocket Hunting Dimension. I didn't know it was an American cheat when the original novel is Chinese... Also the mc in the Naruto fic that you sir seem to read does Chinese things such as refining bone, marrow and other chinese impurities.

Gabichu_Yeah:Wuxia style in a Japanese anime? Where do you normally see that combination?
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Let me be specific, I speak cliches and phrases from Chinese novels, they just don't fit and it personally affects my immersion in the story, also I didn't read your fanfic, I read in a review that tsunade was not a love interest and I lost interest 🤷

Sennengoroshi:Interesting...I just realized that you read a certain Naruto fic with a certain cheat called Pocket Hunting Dimension. I didn't know it was an American cheat when the original novel is Chinese... Also the mc in the Naruto fic that you sir seem to read does Chinese things such as refining bone, marrow and other chinese impurities.