If I had to some it up into one word, it would be unfocused, it's constantly switching perspectives that after reading to the 10th chapter the MC appears so little he's appearances would barely fill 3 chapters
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LIKEKasiCair:Oouf. For me, it is too Chinese to actually enjoy it, to be honest.
Sennengoroshi:I like your new novel, though, sir. But while we're on the subject, what do you have against China?
Sennengoroshi:I like your new novel, though, sir. But while we're on the subject, what do you have against China?
Sennengoroshi:I like your new novel, though, sir. But while we're on the subject, what do you have against China?
Interesting...I just realized that you read a certain Naruto fic with a certain cheat called Pocket Hunting Dimension. I didn't know it was an American cheat when the original novel is Chinese... Also the mc in the Naruto fic that you sir seem to read does Chinese things such as refining bone, marrow and other chinese impurities.
Gabichu_Yeah:Wuxia style in a Japanese anime? Where do you normally see that combination?
Let me be specific, I speak cliches and phrases from Chinese novels, they just don't fit and it personally affects my immersion in the story, also I didn't read your fanfic, I read in a review that tsunade was not a love interest and I lost interest 🤷
Sennengoroshi:Interesting...I just realized that you read a certain Naruto fic with a certain cheat called Pocket Hunting Dimension. I didn't know it was an American cheat when the original novel is Chinese... Also the mc in the Naruto fic that you sir seem to read does Chinese things such as refining bone, marrow and other chinese impurities.