Review Detail of ItsHashi in Chasing Butterflies in Another Life

Hooly, ngl ngl, the story started off a little how to say, not one that would pique my interest, but, just in case i kept reading and oh my it was worth it, i didnt expect it to change from a party of kids into a weak to strong story, and yeah i think the word “almost” may be your filler word, i noticed it quite some times. Overall its pretty good, the grammar is great, i didn’t spot mistakes either.