Thank you for your honest review!! I'll definitely work on the start a little bit more as I am also not satisfied with it at the moment T^T

Interesting story!! The way the author writes too is just marvellous! hoping to see more of Atlas' adventures soon with his journey of forming gangs with the gods and how they'll turn out to be! Keep up the good work author!! ^^

If the book was a person I'd say they're absolutely stunning!! The way the characters interact and different scenes unfolds just makes me so excited and want to read for more! I say great work author and definitely hoping for the best both for you and to your book from the bottom of my heart! Goodluck ♡

I love this!! very great start I must say 💖👏

awww that's cute 🥺🥺

interesting

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great start

Very nice intro to the story! Also the plot twist!?? Fantastic! Would like it more if there's less telling and more showing though (I know old saying but really important!) Goodluck to the author and I'll be looking forward to new adventures with them especially Elias Ayla and Serendipity (love her name so much) !! ><

thanks ><

Thank you so much for your kind review ><

Thank you, welcome to my first story hope you enjoy! ><

Thank you ^^

Gomen, the story needed a little more depth and it's hard to create depth in a first POV

Cool ^^

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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

hello it's not yet published but I was running a fever yesterday so I cou;ldn't type, thank you for supporting mys troy though I thought no one else was reading but rest assured I will update this story later with a new chapter ^^

Woah, thanks for the information ^^

Hmm... okay ^^