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Review Detail of Pclerk in I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

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I have placed a few reviews as I have progressed through the story. The writing quality and updates have continued to be excellent from the beginning until now. Everything else is somehow slowly devolving into some sort of adolescent power fantasy. The development at the start is good, nothing special. Like I said the whole acquisition of other powers made this story go way out there. The genie thing is way to far. The characters at that time are ok. For some reason the characters have devolved into unrealistic child like personalities. All of them. The world building is horrendous now as well. The world descriptions and story have come to essentially nothing. It seems as though the author has lost the story to numerous ideas, no real planning, and some cringe moments. I think more thought needs to be put into what exactly is trying to be achieved and how. Have some more tough moments, etc. At this point, the Mc can just get whatever whenever without any problems… and is still getting more powerful. Have struggle and character development. This will be where I stop as I don’t believe the story is repairable without a rewrite.

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

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