Review Detail of trumpet_creeper01 in ......dropped.......

It's a nice read. As per writing quality, I should say the author needs to work on it, as there seems to be spelling mistakes and such, which is off putting. The author could make the interactions more immersive like adding emotions and all. The writing flow is abrupt sometimes, I hope the author takes it into mind while writing the story and I advise the author to proof read the chapters for a better flow of the story. Maybe describing little more about characters and the world background makes it easier for us readers to imagine easily. I hope my review makes the author improvise and good luck. Fighting!!!