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michael_copeland
michael_copelandLv152yr
2022-06-18 05:41

this is a great fanfic, a little fast paced with less conversations than i would have liked but its great with lots of detail in what abilities the mc has. maybe the author can work on some context about how he gained certain skills with some flashbacks here and there but overall its a great idea with good execution.

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kerichcland
kerichclandAuthor

Thank you for the review. I will strive to do a better job in writing the story.

Isak_Svartrapmo
Isak_SvartrapmoLv4

you should add tags

kerichcland:Thank you for the review. I will strive to do a better job in writing the story.
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