Item: Chasing Night
Rating: 5
Author: NixOrtikal

NixOrtikalLv142yr

2022-06-26 23:52

If you want a slow, sweet, angst filled romance with lots of red herrings/mystery this may be the novel for you. Just start reading and enjoy. Seriously, you don’t need to read any further in this review. To me, the FL is a little too naive and trusting. The ML seems to have more common sense so in her pov so he’s labeled the villain. Plot wise, it’s still in its infancy so the writer may step up with the characters. The pacing is agonizingly slow, plus, I’m convinced all the servants and the people surrounding the FL are brain dead and devoid of personality. Editing wise, very few glaring errors and was easy to read. It’s still in the early stage so hopefully the writer will do more worldbuilding, go into specifics about each character’s background and description, add some lore, and make the characters more likable, engaging and relatable. Overall, You can see that the writer put a lot of effort into her story and that’s commendable, I feel everyone should read it and give it a fair chance and encourage her along the way.

Chasing Night

Fujiashi

4.8

170 Chs

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Lu_ShuiLv14

Hi Fuji! First of all, a very strong and captivating first chapter. Noelle's emotion bled through as I read word per word. I could totally sympathize with her loss. This is something that most authors fail to achieve so very good job on that one! This book is written very nicely without glaring grammatical or spelling mistakes. Overall the pace is moderate, not too fast and also not too slow. The MC is a tragic one, as I implied just now. And the male lead... Well I think it is the male lead, is so... I don't want to spoil anything but I am so conflicted about him 👀 I so hope he's not evil, because he's so hot 🔥🔥🔥. Or if he's evil please make him a nice person again later on 🤣🤣🤣🤣. I could feel that the ML cares for the MC greatly although at this point of time it is completely understanding if the MC doesn't share the feelings. Aaaaaaaaah there is long time to go for these two characters! I have only read up to chapter 8 when I write this review so I am burning with curiosity. All the romance story readers who like a tragic MC on the run and a hot bad boy of a ML should come by and read this novel! You shall not be disappointed, unless dear Author decides to discontinue the story 😂😂😂. Very very good job Fuji, please continue working hard ❤️❤️❤️.

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I love the twist and turns in this book, I fell in love with it just after finishing the first chapter and trust this is the type of book ya'll should add in your library's.the characters were amazing the plot was great ☺️I honestly loved your work Author keep it up Author 💯, the grammar was OK, the synopsis was amazing. Excellent work ✔️💯 I highly recommend this book, please give it a read and trust me you will love this book and please don't forget to add to your book shelf and keep those votes coming.

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Mary_OnadujaLv2

First of all I would give the author of this book a clap👏👏👏👏. This work is marvelous and I could hardly find any grammatical errors no matter how hard I tried to look for one. Secondly, the girl is very ..... How could she still care about Night despite what he did to her. I'm still so curious about why Night killed her parent so this would push me to read further. Kudos to the writer, this story got me hooked up right from the onset and there are lots of mysteries to uncover. Once again I would give the author a round all over plus 👏👏👏👏. This book is really captivating. The author really put a lot of effort. I would tell all the readers out there to give this book their best shot This is my own little point on the book.

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Hassy_101Lv14

I love the display of emotion. You captured perfectly how a person should react in such a situation and I give it to you, you are good. English is on point. I believe there is a misunderstanding, because I love Night already🤗. I totally recommend this book. The author did a great job.

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Wow!!! I'm loving the book 📚📖 I really appreciate the author's hard work poured on this book ❤️💪 keep up the good work dear author. Sending cheers to go more...

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You can see everything like a movie in your mind. I love this type of books that explain deep for the reader to be able to imagine everything. Am really curious about Night, he's a mystery. I hope later he becomes calm🤗 The starting is intriguing. I love it!

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