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ok kl... I will take another look at it soon.
That's where you're wrong. I enjoy constructive criticism. Which I have received from plenty of readers as helpful feedback with plenty of clear, easy-to-follow tips on how to improve or fix my work. Your criticism was vague, harsh and insensitive. You came off as a salty, cheapskate that was enjoying the work but doesn't want to pay for it. So you've been coming to my wall to gripe and complain. You're the type who expects everyone to take what you say without complaint and have the last word. Your ego gets fed when you bully writers. You can dish it but you can't take it.
love it, ty![img=Loving it]
I normally don't argue will trolls. Especially those that claim to be a writer on this platform yet toss their negativity from a fake account. Your replies also get grammatically worse each time you respond and yet you comment about my sentence structure. As a writer you should know that everyone has different tastes and experience, some will like and connect with the characters of my stories others won't. My writing style may not be for you but don't knock or put down what others enjoy. I hope if you stay on this platform that you grow not just as a writer but your character also improves, good luck!
Noted... I wish you nothing but stories that flow like still water in your future.
yh, Victor will drop him if someone stronger comes along
It was a surprise for Sly too!
Think of Sly as belonging to an exclusive club because of his wishbone. So he can see the experiece level of wishbone users, Spirit energy is btained by killing animals or absorbing plant essence. In his world plants & animals can exist for over a million years. Wishbone users kill to get stronger. Pearl: 10+ years Amber: 50+ years Amethyst: 100+ year Diamond: 100,000+ years Jade: 1000,000+ years etc Sentinels & Guides are rated by tiers to find suitable parters, for example, S-Tier (Legendary/Immortal): Skills gained allow for instant regeneration, extreme strength, and faster absorption of spirit energy. A-Tier (Superior/Rare/Prodigy): Generally considered genius-level, offering high essence affinity and durability. More will be explained later.
Victor only wants to date the strongest on campus, becoming s-tier means he can get a stronger boyfriend over William that's currently A-tier. His dating pool just got wider.
The alpha mentioned here is William, he spent excess money to purchase William's affection in gifts.