Please allow my shameless author review! I hope you enjoy my novel as I attempt to write something far outside my comfort zone here. I hope you enjoy it while it happens.

WritingWithJones has transformed into ReviewingWithJones! The writing quality is incredible, the action is really well thought out, I didn't see any typos or wrong grammar whatsoever. The character(s) are really rememberable. The story and plot is really well thought out. The world being in total chaos is a good change of pace for me. The frequency of updates is also really reliable.

There isn't much material to give a proper rating, but for now the book is a 5/5 for me. I've read all the released chapters (12) and so far it's pretty good. Things are well described and there is a considerable amount of secrecy, both around the MC and the surrounding situation. But it's still easy to see that an apocalypse has started in the MC world, and more will likely be explained about it in the future. About the MC, it can be said that his behavior is very realistic. At first I was a little annoyed that he always complained, but then think that I was irrational: The MC is in the apocalypse; dies; mysteriously revives; he needs to find someone he doesn't know; he has to survive situations that realistically have very high probabilities of certain death. So yes, his initial despair makes sense. The way the Author approached the actions and consequences of the MC is also very well done. So far, there have been no forced situations, like making things too easy, or making a situation too difficult/complicated just to put on a false sense of danger. The characters that have appeared so far seem alive and seem to have the ability to think for themselves. This may seem strange, but anyone who's been here on this site long enough is aware of the existence of novels in which all the characters, except the MC, apparently don't think and are totally one-dimensional. These characters' lives revolve around the MC and making their own decisions is a distant dream for them. Villains are also usually horrible, so seeing characters who make their own decisions and who aren't the MC is a relief. [Google translator]

The end of the description with that “Save Elaine” is making me think that the MC will be some loser who’s either forced to save a woman, or does it of his own accord, which is even worse.

Did the MC just resurrect with a system or a soul in the body? Interesting starting plot. The events are described more in detail. Eveni don't understand some parts ,it a good start. Keep going on author.

The story is engaging readers with action-filled chapters starting from chapter one! Very good writing and description! Good job, author 😉😉😉

The plot is really good and I love the characters. It's an amazing story, a masterpiece indeed! I hope the author writes more chapters soon because I feel so thrilled and excited with it!

Reveal spoiler

Knell before me. Fear me. Worship me. Put your belief in me. I am the law. And the law is me. I am an immortal. No one can oppose me. Just kidding..