Review Detail of CopyPaste1 in For Honor x GoT: Ice and Fire

Item: For Honor x GoT: Ice and Fire
Rating: 2.4

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CopyPaste1Lv131yrCopyPaste1

dif the author was 5-10 years older maybe this was a good story! cringe humor of a teenager, bad dialogues almost robotic,plotholes every chapter,having the Mc talk to other lords like they are friends for years ..even in the north you use yhe right title when you talk to lords or heirs.... the 2 Mc is almost brain-deads and the worst half the ideas this author has is stolen from other fics half his story is almost copy paste of a other fic but thia author has worst grammar and cringe "humor" !

For Honor x GoT: Ice and Fire

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DryComplementaryAuthorDryComplementary

Not sure about the grammar so much anymore, I think I have been improving. Anyway, I did say I do this for fun so I guess you can stop reading if you want.

1yr

Drop_BearLv14Drop_Bear

Love how you’re complaining about grammar when you haven’t even looked over your own review and seen the mistakes you’ve made 🥱

1yr

CopyPaste1Lv13CopyPaste1

yea the difference is i wrote a comment and not a whole story with bad grammar.. try something smart to say next time snowflake

Drop_Bear:Love how you’re complaining about grammar when you haven’t even looked over your own review and seen the mistakes you’ve made 🥱

1yr

OdilLv14Odil

I really encourage you to write your own fic. I am currently working on mine, a game of thrones fanfic, still a bit away from being "publishable". But I assure you that the exercise gives you a new appreciation for the Fics you read, no matter the quality. It takes genuine effort.

CopyPaste1:yea the difference is i wrote a comment and not a whole story with bad grammar.. try something smart to say next time snowflake

1yr