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ok it's a greatd book and has a lot of potential, but every time i get Hooked. some npc character backstory i dont need the back story of 2 slave traders that are going to die in the next 2-3 chapters. and it's like 5-6 chapter backstory. i can understand a backstory about 1 chapter or less long just to get the general vibe.specially if they are going to die soon. it just stops the flow of the story. it's already switching POV like crazy don't need random background on random NPCS.

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