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Eternal2145

Eternal2145

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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21456mth
    Posted

    yea it's your typical face slaping however it is forced face slaping. it has no proper buildup up to the face slap, and 2/3 of the book are comments about the stuff going on

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    My Account Banned, I Drove Game Developers Crazy
    Urban ¡ Heavenly Eye Demonic Dragon
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    Eternal21457mth
    Posted

    yes so the title is weird as hell and so is the book it's even weirder

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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
    Urban ¡ A Small Purple Umbrella
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21457mth
    Commented

    what about other planets plus you got all that space in you know space

    "But no matter what, I have to head into interstellar space again. The solar system is our home, so it can't be too crowded. There is no way to build everything here. I have to go to other galaxies to develop...
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    Become The Guard AI Of The Lost Civilization After Transmigration
    Sci-fi ¡ Almost Got Rich
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    Eternal21457mth
    Commented

    shit learn some science stuff recreat ai build shit explore the universe

    The system was a curse to Leo. He could not die as long as his lifespan was higher than one. Every time he committed suicide, his body automatically regenerated and self-resurrected.
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    Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World
    Fantasy ¡ DamnPlotArmor
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21458mth
    Posted

    ok it's a greatd book and has a lot of potential, but every time i get Hooked. some npc character backstory i dont need the back story of 2 slave traders that are going to die in the next 2-3 chapters. and it's like 5-6 chapter backstory. i can understand a backstory about 1 chapter or less long just to get the general vibe.specially if they are going to die soon. it just stops the flow of the story. it's already switching POV like crazy don't need random background on random NPCS.

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    The Record of Orc Civilization
    Fantasy ¡ BugatiCatForm
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21458mth
    Replied to Eternal2145

    P.s referring to current chapter count 572.

    altalt
    Herald of Steel
    War ¡ FerriticMatrix
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21458mth
    Posted

    so I'm up to chapter 50ish it's not even been 2 full days in the book. so by my estimation the full book is 10 days. 😂. no but for real the book is crazy slow in development. and expands everything when it is not needed or explains the same thing with a different character or sometimes the same character.

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    Herald of Steel
    War ¡ FerriticMatrix
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Posted

    the summary already has some contradictions idk about book.

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    I Developed The Zombie Apocalypse And Netizens Went Crazy With Excitement
    Games ¡ Rice Tour
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Posted

    so trash the system gives him all his wants. o need spirit stone, o i need spells. ECT i understand him doing some quest or something but too much "coincidences" is not ok. at least have him worki for the wants/ need instead of just handing them out.

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    I'm Eight. Surely I Can Establish A Sect, Right?
    Eastern ¡ Young Sect Master
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Posted

    it's reiterating the same thing over the span of several chapters. do not waste your time. the mc is a block head who doesn't know anything. also characters just accept what ever he changes like nothing.

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    Living In Another World With A Farm
    Eastern ¡ Ming Yu
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Posted

    SO THE GUY IS A DICK. steals the food from the poorest girl in class and acts like it's not a issue. Also he is VERY stupid. just don't eve try reading.

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    Richest Man: Divine-Grade Reconstruct System
    Urban ¡ Little Grapefruit of the Muzi Family
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Commented

    it should be more since the skills will be with you for longer than your equipment

    Currently, the going rate for an ordinary Tier 1 Skill Book could even rival a piece of Level 30 Fine-Gold Equipment. If it were a powerful Tier 1 Skill such as a Lifesaving-, AOE Attack-, Control-, Control Removal-, or Burst-type Skill Book, no one would sell it even for the price of a Level 30 Dark-Gold Weapon, much less anything Fine-Gold ranked.
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    Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God
    Games ¡ Lucky Old Cat
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    Eternal21451yr
    Commented

    ok I get getting revenge so they are killing black flame but what about the armor kits how are they going to get them by killing black flame

    “All is well as long as you know it. Our task is very simple this time: assist Young Master Feng in obtaining 300 Intermediate Mana Armor Kits. It will be even better if we can obtain even more equipment and kits. However, since the Dragon-Phoenix Pavilion is spearheading this matter, it is best if we keep a low-profile. So, first, let’s focus on getting the 300 Intermediate Mana Armor Kits,” the thin man, Third Ghost, said. “This time, to ensure we complete our task, I have even called Old Four and Old Seven to help us. With the five of us, we should be able to take down Black Flame easily. The only thing we have to worry about is the Pavilion itself. It is best if we form a proper plan.”
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    Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God
    Games ¡ Lucky Old Cat
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Commented

    where's the chickens comment

    "Total combat power: 702 (this combat power does not include talent)
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    Mystery Descends: My Exchanges Are Not Equal
    Sci-fi ¡ Pure Salted Fish
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Commented

    pretty sure it said outside items where not allowed in the game. clothes is a exception but cigarettes.

    Wang Teng took out a box of cigarettes he had brought from the original world as he watched the people of Beggar's Sect leave.
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    Mystery Descends: My Exchanges Are Not Equal
    Sci-fi ¡ Pure Salted Fish
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Posted

    by chapter 3 this got ruined. a random girl claims him as her boyfriend out of the blue he just goes along with it. also for some reason she feels attracted to him all of a sudden when she didn't even give him a second glance 2 chapters ago. i understand it could be the game shit but wtf. this guy says he feels strong enough to destroy the world. what does he do he goes about his life like normal he's probably the strongest person alive. idk a huge let down stopped at chapter 4 don't waste your time

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    Game Materialization: My Identity As The Immortal Emperor Is Exposed
    Games ¡ Plato's Joseki
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Posted

    the theme is ok however it goes down hill fast the mc is arrogant and he always gets everything if not it's magically recalled into existence. I've seen plot armor but this is the the most obscene plot armour ever. his ex from another past life magically falls in love when she only met him for 1 day. 10 minutes into seeing her he is missing her on the cheek/lips and she doesn't say shit she just blushes like wtf. read one of the 5 stars reviews it's full of Bs maybe 5-10% of it is true the rest is not. this is definitely a hard pass tried sticking to it but no it's just gets worse.

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    MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
    Games ¡ Hamapo
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Commented

    when was this???

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
    Games ¡ Hamapo
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  • Eternal2145
    Eternal21451yr
    Posted

    Soo the book starts off with alot of contradictions. at the start the announce the amount of awakened in each rank. they go on to say that above S there was only one person. so why do all the characters say that ooo your B grade you are very strong second only to A rank. the A rank they say is the strongest. like wtf is everyone blind. another example is the storage ring. it says only non living can be stored. yet he stores his pet in the storage ring. most comments said o it's undead. it's still moving and has a undead life force. besides it was never described or anything. names change at will. idk it's junk

    altalt
    Global Towers: Starting With The SSS-Rank Talent, God-Tier Extraction
    Fantasy ¡ Light Tower Ascension
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    Eternal21451yr
    Posted

    I don't know why it did not get chosen it's great lol why do you guys always skip on these. everyone come ready it it's amazing you will not regret it.

    altalt
    No One Can Leave The Beginner's Village
    Games ¡ Elderly Guest On Changbai Mountain
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