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Earl_McClain
Earl_McClainLv112yr
2022-10-14 22:55

this was a great book at the beginning, but seriously it delved into a troupe , human in monster skin, no true world building, as we barely know much about it. then lest not talk about Anna, it's her story apparently 🤷. but moku our "Supposed MC" isn't really likable, but you don't hate him he's just boring & closed minded. then you all these forms with different ideologies & background that truly isn't necessary to explain them in such detail; too much trying to promote his culture with the naming sense (Author him/herself). levels & ranks are too complicated , & too much emphasis on moku's power , not necessarily moku himself as growth in character. no is he allowing his other Main Orcs get Character Development. Orcs being in shambles (Crying) because his brother died is blasphemy , they are Raging creatures where killing is second nature death of those near is nothing new , they knew this before moku even came to their world. these aren't Orcs , Not Monsters , but just Green Humans smh 🤦 & please for the love of the readers who probably still read this , stop saying "Moku this Moku that each sentence. here's an example Moku looked up at his assailant, gauging the distance from which he could strike. Then he took a stance and activated his "Such & Such" form.

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Earl_McClain
Earl_McClainLv11

an example of correct grammar

BugatiCatForm
BugatiCatFormAuthor

The truth is, the real MC of this story are the orcs, cause the title is The Record Of Orc Civilization not The Record of Moku Civilization. So of course as the author I focus so much in development of the orcs. Moku it self is only the trigger which bring the new way of life for the orc. The reason I so much focus on Anna (or Nevare in later chapter) is because she is the first she-orc, the progenitor queen of all female orc in their long history. In the matter of this, the rise of Nevare as the first of her kind is more important then Moku's development itself cause without woman there is no family, and without family there is no civilization. Sorry for the grammar is my first English book and I still learning...

orangegummy
orangegummyLv13

philippines orc haha

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Zeno
ZenoLv5

the story is entertaining and you can see the effort of the author, plus you can also see that he wants to promote his culture, but in my opinion, doing this practically shot himself in the foot, greatly reducing the audience, since there are many words that are practically the movement of his martial art and weapons, ranks, that the author puts them with names that as readers we are not used to, since practically when reading several novels, one forgets what that name and movement represented (did I understand myself here?) , and it's annoying. Also, the "MC" wasn't an MMA fighter? Because he practically only uses the martial art of his hometown? Can't he use others as well or try to combine them all like some manga characters do, becoming stronger like that? like garou from one punch man, some characters from kengan asura, and baki from baki. Also, the cultivation system of the mc and possibly the orc race is interesting, but I think it just unnecessarily complicates things when they can easily have a simpler cultivation system like most cultivation novels or Japanese magic novels, and As far as it goes, there is not much development of the mc's story, the creation of the world is good, but very, very slow. I will leave the novel here, it is good, but it bothers too much the names that the author of his culture uses, since one forgets their meanings, and I think that happens to most readers, and they end up abandoning it and only a few read it. read, or maybe it's just me, and that's why I think the author practically shot himself in the foot, although that part could be fixed with editing, using more general names that are understood by most, and in parentheses the author puts as he calls him originally, I think that with that he could have more readers, and the orc farming system, although interesting, is very complicated in my opinion, and could be simpler. martial arts were born out of the need of the weak to defend themselves from the strong, in itself the martial arts are to protect you. Thank you for your attention.

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