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hyemi_m
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2022-06-16 01:10

There are grammatical mistakes here and there but its not something that you halt you from reading. From the first chapter, its intriguing and eye catching. There is a lot of mystery to uncover from the beginning that leaves you desperate to find out. I am very interested to see the growth of both the story and the author's writing ability!!!

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GODOFCAT
GODOFCATAuthor

Thank you very much, and your right I'm still improving my writing quality

GODOFCAT
GODOFCATAuthor

My wrong is in the tenses right?, right don't worry I've started studying it a few days ago and now I'm editing the chapter

GODOFCAT
GODOFCATAuthor

I already fixed the mistake, but I'm not 100 sure though

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