Review Detail of Mirodin in Outside Of Time

Please translator, stop overusing the word "also". I am at the beginning and not sure if it gets better, but you overuse that word so damn much. You could take it out from almost every sencence you use it in and it would only make the sentence better and cleaner, without removing any meaning. No point in starting sentences with "Also, ... " either. Just remove that word from narrator descriptions. It is a parasitic and useless word. Check your word order as well, it is a bit of a mess, but nothing that cannot be overlooked. Just the word "also" has begun to irk me.