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NeygariLv152mth
2024-12-01 08:05

The novel is a lord novel, but the MC is a true oddball and it feels more like reading the tale of a crazy scientist. Quite refreshing compared to the common weak - strong theme. The story takes a few chapters to kick off, but after that it is quite fast paced. A negative point is the incosistent naming (mostly of the spirit monsters), that might be a translation issue. You often have to guess which carakter is meant. Another major negative point are the garbeled updates. It is truly exhausting trying to guess the storyline from a bunch of disjointed paragraphs. The suggested fix mentiond the top of the chapters also never worked for me.

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NeygariLv15

Update: I made that review at around ch. 100 after a few garbeld updates. Now I am at 198 and it has become completely unreadable. I am dropping this.

infernojasonLv15

same thoughts I'm at chapter 152 and decided to stop reading do too the random paragraphs I am having a headache reading and rearranging the chapter afterwards just to get a simple understanding of what is happening in that chapter also there seems to be skipped chapters

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