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Finally a chronicle fanfic I thought I was the only one who knows that movie they didn't give it enough Justice. I especially did not like the ending where he died but I can't wait to see where you go with it so I'm giving you my support all the way 👍

It started out as a good story, but then it got so many tricks that it ended up being a very cliche gary stu. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

So far so good,The Doctor is in! loving the fic so far, hope the author-san can go the distance [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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please let the next one be pirates of the Caribbean..........................................................................................

I stayed in chapter 60, I didn't like it mainly because the mc for me is much weaker than the rest of the group, he has telekinesis which is a skill that can be too powerful but it seems that the mc didn't want to improve it reaching no occupy it in the entire training arc of 5 years, it has the benefits of the administrator but it seems that the system forgot because even ciri gets more points from the system, everyone in the group is given many powerful abilities except the mc, from my point of view from sight even guts is stronger than the mc, the missions are very easy and boring etc, it seems to me that the author wanted to nerf the mc a lot, but I liked the story it just bothered me a little that the author nerfed everything from the mc to The luck that the system gives you, that's all, thank you author for entertaining me and I hope I have not offended you with my review. (Google traductor) ._.

Love the story! Possibly the story i look forward to the most on this app at the moment. I love the ever expanding world and the TV shows incorporated. definitely loved the how I met your mother cross over and hope for more. but this story gots basically everything I want. slice of life, adventure, magic, awesome characters from different stories. character growth, changing destinies. Definitely a fan and think everyone should give it a chance.

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I love this fanfic a lot! it checks almost every aspect I like to see in a fanfic, too bad it's in hiatus. i regret not finding this earlier. five stars!