Review Detail of NebuIa in Sin System: Demonic Harem After Reincarnation

A loser would always be a loser in the end. Even his method to seduce the wives of others are of low grade. His name is Jake, but I don't think he's suitable for such name, Japanese name is more suitable for the MC in my opinion. There's also this dungeon things on the Novel, It's a bit lacking and uninteresting. Perhaps, You might need to get ideas from Overlord LN version of dungeon called the; Great Tomb Of Nazarick. That's what a dungeon is supposed to be like. Next, I'm not really against the MC stealing others wives, But his method to do so is a bit trashy and only goes to showed how lazy the author is. I mean, All it took the MC are brain washing and charm skill to seduce most of the women. There is no challenge or fun at all when you read the novel. The MC could have use his intelligent and plot to seduce those women for as long as 2-3 Chapters, This way, The author can increase his readers anticipation for future lemon scenes while at the same time increasing the number of chapters. But Instead he used his brain washing skill to seduce the wives of others in an instant which completely extinguished readers anticipation and excitement while at the same time caused the previously interesting female character to lose their originality after being made Erin blood servant and corrupted by Jake skill. On this matter, The author still have to learn more from True_Seeker, Author of Sinful Life of The Emperor. Not saying that you need to copy his MC style of seducing the myriad of wives , But to know that his MC barely use any mind control or brain washing skill to fudge which in my opinion is more interesting than subduing the myriad of wives instantly. Making use of brain washing and charm skills to seduce his prey instantly, where is the fun in doing that? It's like battling with bots on PUBG, The difficulty to finish the game is very ez since the opponent are only Bots. The player (MC) that is fighting (Seducing) the bots (Brainwashed Wives) defeat (Conquer) the Bots (Brainwashed Wives) easily and started to feel bored, The player (MC) himself is feeling bored by the lack of challenge, much less the spectator (Readers) of the battle (Novel)? Would the spectator (Readers) continue to spectate (Read) the battle (Novel) between the Player (MC) and Bots (Brainwashed Wives) or stop spectating the battle completely (Dropping the novel)? Though, It's not as if there is nothing noteworthy on this novel, What I like about this novel is that the author didn't remove the MC capability to impregnate his women. Unlike what most author's writing smut novels would do, Implementing Baby hater, Semen steriliser skill blabla just because their writing skills are lacking. Although my constructive criticism review might seem hurtful, In truth, I didn't really plan to stop reading it anytime soon. Maybe I'll stop reading it occasionally, But I'll always return to read the novel for research purposes. This is the advantage of smut novel with plot, Once dropped, Readers would still return once they feel horny. Unlike those trash novel without harem and romance, Once dropped, Forever dropped. Though, An exception exists for some novels, But great novel isn't cabbage commonly seen in supermarkets, Isn't it? Finally, My reason for writing this review is to let the author know how disappointed I am with the MC usage of his corruption and charm skill. I hope the MC will stop using those skills on the myriad of wives he's going to seduce. I don't have any problem if the MC is going to use the manipulation skills on men he cucked to make them his loyal dogs, But just don't use them on those myriad of wives he has yet to conquer. If you really did this, Maybe I'll take the novel a bit seriously instead of only treating the novel as a joke. If you think about it, I don't have anything to lost even if the problems I mentioned above continued, I'll just drop the story and look for other novels to read. Meanwhile, You, Can choose to disregard my constructive review and risked losing many readers in the process.