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2022-08-09 23:45

It's my first time reading a historical romance so I gave it a try. The plot was great although the placement of the person who said the dialogues was a bit confusing. For example, the dialogue was from Isabella but the name after the dialogue was another person, which makes me think it was the latter rather than the former who were talking. But overall, good job author👍🏻

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Blossom_Harold_1
Blossom_Harold_1Author

can you please tell me what chapter this was? and also, thank you for reading this book and I hope you'll continue reading 😊

Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

actually it was from the first chapter. The first paragraph was okay but then the rest of them were a bit confusing😅maybe it's better if you separated it then shows who said the dialogues. Just a suggestion👍🏻

Blossom_Harold_1:can you please tell me what chapter this was? and also, thank you for reading this book and I hope you'll continue reading 😊
Blossom_Harold_1
Blossom_Harold_1Author

Alright I'll look into it but I hope you keep reading

Rin_Nurnia:actually it was from the first chapter. The first paragraph was okay but then the rest of them were a bit confusing😅maybe it's better if you separated it then shows who said the dialogues. Just a suggestion👍🏻
Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

Don't worry. Adding it into my collection

Blossom_Harold_1:Alright I'll look into it but I hope you keep reading
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