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Review Detail of Wolfsword in The Legend of the Yellow Haired Butcher (Namikaze Minato Self insert)

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Wolfsword
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I like the two chapter that is actually about the mc and even like the idea of how you're doing the story I just wish the other six chapters weren't just stuff that doesn't really matter when you currently only have two chapters on the actual mc. I feel like if you had added these little journal entries later in the story like when you had even ten or so chapters it wouldn't be as harmful but when there are six journal entries and only two actual chapters. I say this because it is like watching a tv show and out of 8 episodes only two have to do with the actual plot the other six are just random stuff that don't fully even make sense because you are alluding to stuff that's not important cause we have barely gotten to know the mc. I am you have a couple of journal entries before we even get to understand anything about the mc.

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The Legend of the Yellow Haired Butcher (Namikaze Minato Self insert)

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i understand man maybe i will put those as a auxilary chapter