Love the story but please fix the grammar issue of switch the mc with the name Bellatrix nott

Love the story so far really enjoy the way it looks like it is going. Hope you keep writing this story

I love the story so far hope you keep at just wanted to point out that you accidentally said in the omake that his mother was a Gryffindor when in the backstory about her it was said she went into Slytherin and it was the father that was the Gryffindor

cant wait for more chapter keep up the good work

Love it keep up the good work

love the story and effort you put in for it cause I am always excited to read it but honestly wouldn't mind if you took longer to post and made the chapter longer cause this one and the last one could have just been one cause of there length

Will give you power stones when I have some just already used them today

This is the type of harry potter fanfiction I have been trying to find and I really hope you keep this going at the same quality you have now. Cant wait to see how you progress this story.

Love the idea for the story cant wait to see were you take this story

Love the story keep up the good work your doing an amazing job because pronouns seem to be your only issue grammatically on just using the wrong one such as he when it suppose to be she or vise versa

The only grammar issue I see so far is that your having some issues using the right pronoun such as you sometimes say he for yang xin when she is a female

Just want you to pay him money to read such a scam..........................................................................................................................................................................................

can’t wait for the next chapter

Honestly really good story love everything story development-wise also because you didn't just make the mc overpowered from the start they have to work their way to it which is a nice touch. Sadly though I won't be continuing to read the story because of the grammar issue all over the story like constantly interchanging he and her. As well as other small mistakes like that happening often throughout the story in the thirty chapters I have read so far.

I like the two chapter that is actually about the mc and even like the idea of how you're doing the story I just wish the other six chapters weren't just stuff that doesn't really matter when you currently only have two chapters on the actual mc. I feel like if you had added these little journal entries later in the story like when you had even ten or so chapters it wouldn't be as harmful but when there are six journal entries and only two actual chapters. I say this because it is like watching a tv show and out of 8 episodes only two have to do with the actual plot the other six are just random stuff that don't fully even make sense because you are alluding to stuff that's not important cause we have barely gotten to know the mc. I am you have a couple of journal entries before we even get to understand anything about the mc.

if you fixed all the grammar mistakes like fish adoptive mom constantly being called he when she a she this story would be ten time better

fix your chapter 1 and 2

please go back and fix the grammar in this chapter

Scam literally the one review sounds like a huge scam the story itself is missing the first couple of chapters and then when it finally has one it like chapter 7 and it advertising paying to get 50 chapter ahead but it missing the first 6 chapters or so and there is no title or summary so you don't even know what the story about and I am pretty sure this will get deleted that why I'm not caring about grammar and just writing it all as a run on sentence.

this story is one of the good ones please come back and keep writing it