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2023-02-22 16:37

don't know why, it feels uncomfortable to read. other than that, it's a good novel. ndidbxjsjsjsjsjsjbsisjsbiskznkzbzjzbzixbxjxbxjxhxbxixbxj

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Author Review: Well with some shame, I'll review my own work, hoping to support it and that more people pick it up. Writing Quality: I'll say it is quite good, I always check for grammar errors, before posting, while some things can always escape my sight, I always correct them when someone makes me notice it. Stability of Updates: I'm always on time, when I say that I'll post a chapter, it will happen, I also post bonus almost every week. Story Development: A bit slow, I'm trying to not rush through the scenes, and I'm still at the beginning of the story as I'm writing this review, but I make sure to frequentily check the flow of it, and make sure to not create plot hole. Character Design: On this nothing to original or over the top, but in the case of the non-OC characters, I always make sure to not distort their personalities, at least not without just cause, ie: MC did something, as well try to make them as fleshed out as I can at the moment. Talking of the MC, he is a good guy, while he will be able to kill his opponents he will only reclutantely do so, his background is that of an idealistic doctor, so if he can save a life he will do anything possible to do so. While the other OC, I planned to make them as varied and different from each other as possible, World Background: Well this is a Multiverse one, but I try to study in deep every world I write about and if I add something to it, I make sure that is credible, and coerent with the rest. All in all, I think I'm doing a good job for now, and I feel that I'm improving every chapter I write, and while the world of the MC isn't the most popular one, it is still something not so much explored on this site and does that did so give up soon after writing a few chapters, so a good challenge, and for those that pick it up but are worried that I'll drop it, can take it easy as I'll finish this story... Like always have fun reading, Ciao.

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