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2022-08-31 07:17

Another excellent Chapter, and now things are finally starting to pick up the pace even more. I can't wait to see Jayr in a Gold cloth, maybe he will upgrade his own cloth, or will he steal some from Hades or Poseidon and "Purify) them... Or make a new one from zero... I don't know but I am pretty excited to find out. Continue with the excellent work man, I definitely appreciate it. Just the fact you are doing something more original, even using very different worlds for your history is already a pretty good thing. I am loving it. Heck, I even went searching for some Saint Seya fics around and found literally nothing interesting. So you are currently the frigging best saint Seya writer around. Congratulations!! :)

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