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Mudd
MuddLv152yr
2022-06-26 22:44

I've read the novel till 288+ and still the Mc interaction with the other characters is close to 0, i mean every time they are summoned to that space you will only see the Raphael(MC) at the end of the questionnaire when he is receiving his Reward. The novel honestly would have been fine without the author ever mentioning Raphael(MC) in the story. Raphael(MC) was honestly useless in the whole time he existed other than pulling the characters to the space and when they finish the questionnaire he receives some powers that he never ever used the whole time (288 chapters). I won’t say that the whole novel is bad, like i said before i read the novel till 288, but this is the best i can say in a review.

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BeguilingIncubus
BeguilingIncubusLv3

What makes me upset was when shield offered him a job I thought he'd accept it, but instead he rejected it right away. I know being involved is a hassle, but if the mc never takes action why bother having an mc??

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

novels like this are not supposed to have an MC... author tried to do something differently and failed miserably

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