Overall, it was very frustrating. You give a guy an OP powerset and then feed him power piece meal. That along with thier being NOTHING else to this novel then fighting bad guys leaves alot of emptiness in the plot area.Then this is written like a mystery novel or should have been if you wanted to write a Dark Kinght style fanfic. But there is no real mystery. No, who done it. Last but not least, why are you modeling someone who is supposed to be as strong as Superman off batman. Makes no sense. I came for someone with the powers of Black Bolt, but what i got was a batman knock-off.
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