Review Detail of RandomSwordsThief in Reincarnated in the Novel as a Villain
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The character he transmigrated into was not a villain. Merely the novel's protagonist victim. The MC's parents were killed by the character's parents, so he wants revenge. However, the character's parents are already dead, so he targets the character himself instead. Honestly, he is just an antagonist at most. I don't know where the word villain came from in the title. "Axtrav must confront his own morality and find a way to change his fate before it's too late.". You would think that he would have to do some really messed up things to confront his morality, but in actuality, he just robs the protagonist's (who is bent on killing him) opportunities and then thinks about how guilty he should feel. The more I read the more I want to slap him.
Reincarnated in the Novel as a Villain
Martialdaoist
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Several grammar mistakes here and there. He and She are misused many times. The transitionings between scenes are done poorly as shown in the picture below. Grait and Alaya were talking, and out of nowhere, we return back to the conversation between the kids.
Martialdaoist:And it bugs me that I lost 2 stars bcoz the book sounds misleading.đ if you found any other problem or stuff then tell me.
RandomSwordsThief:Several grammar mistakes here and there. He and She are misused many times. The transitionings between scenes are done poorly as shown in the picture below. Grait and Alaya were talking, and out of nowhere, we return back to the conversation between the kids.image
Umm... Read the 59th chapter (gonna upload in an hour or two) you will get an explanation about it. I don't know if that's gonna satisfy you or not but I think it should be sufficient reason.
Swiftescape:Remove villain tag. Just a fake villain.
Read it. It's just merely an explanation why you made this novel misleading. I don't know why author's like to entice certain readers, and then pull a bait & switch. Either say plainly this novel does not have a villain mc (while removing the villain tag/mention of villain in the title), or actually make your mc a villain.
Martialdaoist:Umm... Read the 59th chapter (gonna upload in an hour or two) you will get an explanation about it. I don't know if that's gonna satisfy you or not but I think it should be sufficient reason.
Swiftescape:Like all of us understand what conventional "villains" do. Why is it so hard for you all to stick to the same script? Instead of writing useless subversions that do not elevate the story in any way meaningful.
Eno_Banahene:can u give a good novel in which mc is a villain for me(real one pls)