ImSadgeLv41yr

2023-12-20 21:47

This is surely not because I was threaten to do this. -The writing quality sure is improving and the author has made progress in his way of describing things (although I still have a stroke and some miss typos here and there). The way he chose his words was quite easy to read unlike some of the novels where you must have the dictionary by your side. This is both good and bad as if you want to delve further into developing characters, you must know the way to play with those sophisticated words. -The way the author describes the actions of his characters feels quite bland and repeats like at the end of any character sentence he just does as the guide told by adding "he/she said/thought". By focusing more on their conversations and actions, you can express more feelings to develop their inner emotions.

Reincarnated in the Novel as a Villain

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