Review Detail of Jack_Dragneel_9877 in Rewriting #1

I will just list everything that is wrong with this fanfiction: 1 - The author doesn't know much about DxD, most likely has watched only parts of the anime and that isn't enough, because the anime for DxD slips a lot of things. 2 - The author tries to use complex words to discuss complex topics like philosophy and the like and he fails miserably. I had to re-read every chapter once or twice to understand it and even then half of what the author wrote doesn't make and isn't connected to the story. 3 - 70% of every chapter till now ( ch. 20 ) is useless word padding, monologues and ramblings of the MC that aren't connected, don't make sense and complete waste of time. 4 - The author jumps from scene to scene making it seem like the readers have missed something. An example of this is when we see the status screen of the MC of Solo Leveling( the system comes from here ), but we are not told that because it says that the system shows this screen and you need to read the comments attached to the paragraph to know that this status screen is about the MC of SL. Another example is the fact that the MC triggered some hidden quest and he needs to increase his some percentage based status bar and he almost dies but plot armor saves him then a day after this scene he can increase this status bar somehow. We are not told how he does it or how he can do that when he didn't know about this a day earlier. 5 - The author constantly changes the background of the MC. First he was orphan who became rich by himself, then it changed to something else. It changes for the 3rd time when he now is orphan who was lazy and someone who wasted his. 6 - The MC is a hypocrite filled with baseless arrogance, but in his monologues he is a normal person with morals. He isn't something special, but even though he has fragments memories and doesn't remember the plot of DxD he is sure that he can become strong as a human. The MC is constantly angry that he was transmigrated to DxD and wants to have revenge on the one who did it. Doesn't use the little knowledge he has before it becomes obsolete, doesn't try to establish connection with the devils even though his action make him very suspicious to them. Why? Well according to the MC he does all of these things, because the bwing that reincarnated him wants to use him as entertainment so he wants to make himself boring. He doesn't even consider the fact that ROB may erase him from existence. 7 - The MC is dumb. He uses almost all of his points to increase Strength. Why, because according to him Fallen Angel's can fly so he can't escape from them. Doesn't consider the fact that if they can fly he can't hit them so his Strength is useless. He doesn't increase his Stamina which he needs to use the Boosted Gear. On top of all that he wastes 5-8 chapters on his Sacred Gear. Which he doesn't use or try to increase his proficiency in, because he doesn't want to be dependent on it. Then why waste so much time trying to unlock it??? I can go on and on, but this I think is enough cor people to get the idea.