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2022-06-08 17:10

It was good at the beginning, but then it devolved into a plot armor mess. A Mary Sue that schemes all day long. Don't expect any tension, horror, or anything from this story, as soon as she wins the lottery of 500+ million pounds, it becomes a pay to win story where everything goes the MCs way as she throws money at it and plot armor throws money back at her. Kinda sad because I liked the MC, but the author destroyed her by pretty much giving her every fanfic cliche the HP world has. About the only thing she didn't get is the OP system. I'm so disappointed. So I give this story a

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