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Lilliana_Wolfe
Lilliana_WolfeLv112yr
2023-01-23 09:03

There's a lot going on but the different parts are separated in a way that makes it easy to keep track of. So far the plot is something most readers will be familiar with, which isn't a bad thing! I'm a sucker for plots like this. Sidenote: I'm glad to see the notes you have left after your chapters, promising to do touch-ups later on. Interested in reading more. [img=recommend]

Will Fate Bring Us Together?

Rayne_Rue
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36 Chs

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_mystique_
_mystique_Lv3

A whirlwind of emotions!!! So the story stars with Emma coping up with the loss of her two year relationship with Emir, who apparently chose some other girl over her. I truly feel bad for the mail lead, Emma, here. She had been doing everything to get over him, trying to make new friends, focussing on her work but the flashbacks of the past comes back to her every now and then and she can't help but dive into the memories of the past. The place where the plot thickens is when she realizes someone had been stalking her for a long time, keeping track of everything she does and everywhere she goes. Emma can't help but be creeped out about this and I as a reader can't help but be extremely excited about this. I just hope author releases more chapters soon because I'm too impatient.

2yr

Patricia_Levy
Patricia_LevyLv11

I’v read three chapters, and I’m hooked. One thing I love: the author promises to fix their mistakes. I love an author who knows they will need to edit. Another thing: I love how the story is developing. I am predicting the future already, which happens a lot when I read. But I have a really good feeling this book will exceed my expectations! Keep up the great work!

2yr
_Himari_Nora_
_Himari_Nora_Lv1

The story is amazing. It's idea of a girl fighting hard to forget her previous relationships and a guy obsessed with her is a hard plot and interesting at the same time. However, I didn't like a lot how emir behaved with her in the eleventh chapter. I wish Emma end up with Jason, and not Emir, but who knows what fate brought to those two. The story is great, but what needed to be improved, is the writing quality of an author, but we're all studying and noboby is perfect. Great job author. Looking out for more chapters!

2yr
GODOFCAT
GODOFCATLv2

The way the author writes the scenery is a little bad but still readable. I can see a lot of mistakes I mean a lot but the author says she will update them so let's just wait. I rarely read an FL novel but this one is good but due to grammar mistakes and poor writing it became a little bad. but that doesn't mean it was not readable. Try reading it you might like it, just like me. So I advise you to improve your writing and update again.

2yr
Lil_Amore
Lil_AmoreLv13

I sincerely love this story already 🥺💋, just that the Fl brings me to tears whenever she recalls Emir💔. Emir is really a jerk and I hate him already😣. Love this book so much💯, I'm definitely rating 5 stars. thank you author for such a wonderful story 🌹.

2yr
Junni_MC
Junni_MCLv13

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Lv13

Will Fate bring us together? I don't know, but my fate brought me here. Love this so much author. A perfect story line for my preference. Keep going author...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
OnizukaShinu
OnizukaShinuLv12

Great story with greater premise. It can be executed better yet the author did his best on attracting the readers in the first few chapters. It was a good read.

2yr
blossoms_hkhk
blossoms_hkhkLv11

I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. The story is super captivating. The plot and characters both are interesting. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍

2yr
NixOrtikal
NixOrtikalLv14

Grammar mistakes aside, the writer weaves a wonderful story in a modern day setting. Give this novel a chance if you're into love triangles, emotional and sappy hear breaking moments, an FL that can't seem to make up her mind or know when to call it quits, then this tear jerker may be the novel for you!

2yr
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