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RogerKaos
RogerKaosLv12yr
2022-06-07 04:20

Stable updates, interesting direction where the story is heading, and good characters. My only complain is that I got lost at times with this webnovel, but asides from that, it's a job well done!

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ColiJiyo
ColiJiyoAuthor

Hey RogerKaos, thanks for taking the time to read and leaving a review. I do agree that at times I've got a Fog in my mind and that makes reflects in my story. Do you know which part of the webnovel/ chapter that you felt lost? I might rework those part and take note to avoid such mistake in the future. I find it quite difficult to spot these kinds of mistakes especially after writing the story. It's like I've got a filter that prevents me from seeing it hahaha.

RogerKaos
RogerKaosLv1

Thanks! But... That might be because I am not a huge reading expert, so... I am not quite sure how to put it. Sorry in advance.

ColiJiyo:Hey RogerKaos, thanks for taking the time to read and leaving a review. I do agree that at times I've got a Fog in my mind and that makes reflects in my story. Do you know which part of the webnovel/ chapter that you felt lost? I might rework those part and take note to avoid such mistake in the future. I find it quite difficult to spot these kinds of mistakes especially after writing the story. It's like I've got a filter that prevents me from seeing it hahaha.
ColiJiyo
ColiJiyoAuthor

No problem. Appreciate it anyway! I think I will do some editing by adding some context to the new scenes, or flashbacks so that the scene is a little more established and the reader will know what just transpire. Maybe that will help with the issue for now. But thanks for reading!

RogerKaos:Thanks! But... That might be because I am not a huge reading expert, so... I am not quite sure how to put it. Sorry in advance.
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