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Dark_James
Dark_JamesLv12yr
2022-12-06 11:09

Muito boa obra, apesar de umas partes serem muito ruchadas e outras muito lentas, foi uma boa obra.. espero que tenha mais (escrevendo isso depois de ler o capítulo 85)

A Hentai System in the World of Dungeon Ni Deai

ParodyGirl
4.6
179 Chs

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ParodyGirl
ParodyGirlAuthor

This is the first time I've written fanfic and it's also the first time I've written h3nt41 content, so it probably won't be very good. I will try to get better and better at describing the scenes, but it's a little difficult xD Thanks to everyone who is reading! This story doesn't deserve 5 stars, but I'll give it since I'm the author lol

2yr

Times_Avatar
Times_AvatarLv4

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

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2yr
Lunar_Light
Lunar_LightLv15

First impression is not good, there is a lot of information missing, the mc feels like a japanese beta mc mixed with self centered chinese mc, but the good side of those two isn’t there, grammar is okay, but the flow feels awkward

2yr
GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv1

MC is a submissive that likes being dominated. Author killed off bell, but then some readers cried so he changed it, now he helps bell instead. He gives most of his money to Hestia to help pay of her debts, not sure if that includes bells knife, I stopped reading at that point.

1yr
HONOR
HONORLv4

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
Zekril
ZekrilLv4

The first 50 chapter is good but then it come to hia level up which destroyed it Instead of shop became skill share I dont know whata the writer thinking about hia mc abilities chu choices

2yr
QueenMeri
QueenMeriLv2

it's a very good fanfic :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

2yr
rbp
rbpLv2

not well planned fanfic, i hope you can rewrite it to what was originally your idea and not be influenced by your readers unless it's for the better of the novel/novel go downhill. well 👍 for the effort keep writing and sorry for my grammar english is my third language after all.

1yr
PearOfDeezNuts
PearOfDeezNutsLv3

To be honest I basically barely remember anything but the fact I'm still reading it means it's a good FF to read(in my opinion). SO read if you want.

2yr
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