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Otaku_Sam
Otaku_SamLv12yr
2022-08-12 10:50

Tbh i won't read the novel (i don't plan to) but i'm leaving 5/5 just bcs author seems to care about what the readers say and wish to improve, and *for me* it is quite a rare thing to see here, there are a lot of good authors a lot of toxic ones too (i mean in personality, there are some toxic one's w/ good novels too), but so far only some of them want to improve, so good luck on that and all the best for u. (Even if you want to improve trough reviews, there are a lot of toxic readers too, so be careful to not lose the drive to write.)

A Hentai System in the World of Dungeon Ni Deai

ParodyGirl
4.6
179 Chs

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ParodyGirl
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This is the first time I've written fanfic and it's also the first time I've written h3nt41 content, so it probably won't be very good. I will try to get better and better at describing the scenes, but it's a little difficult xD Thanks to everyone who is reading! This story doesn't deserve 5 stars, but I'll give it since I'm the author lol

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Melshan
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Lunar_Light
Lunar_LightLv15

First impression is not good, there is a lot of information missing, the mc feels like a japanese beta mc mixed with self centered chinese mc, but the good side of those two isn’t there, grammar is okay, but the flow feels awkward

2yr
GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv1

MC is a submissive that likes being dominated. Author killed off bell, but then some readers cried so he changed it, now he helps bell instead. He gives most of his money to Hestia to help pay of her debts, not sure if that includes bells knife, I stopped reading at that point.

2yr
HONOR
HONORLv4

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
Zekril
ZekrilLv4

The first 50 chapter is good but then it come to hia level up which destroyed it Instead of shop became skill share I dont know whata the writer thinking about hia mc abilities chu choices

2yr
QueenMeri
QueenMeriLv2

it's a very good fanfic :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

2yr
rbp
rbpLv2

not well planned fanfic, i hope you can rewrite it to what was originally your idea and not be influenced by your readers unless it's for the better of the novel/novel go downhill. well 👍 for the effort keep writing and sorry for my grammar english is my third language after all.

2yr
PearOfDeezNuts
PearOfDeezNutsLv3

To be honest I basically barely remember anything but the fact I'm still reading it means it's a good FF to read(in my opinion). SO read if you want.

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