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Overall this is good story. Need improvement like Writing Qualities so reader can easy to read. And need more word to write for a single chapter, but don't do it if its burdened author. And don't give up to write a story until finish. Many fanfic author lose their idea because the Their MC is too Overpower or too many outsmarting their MC enemies. And in this fanfic/novel, until this chapter, MC have many space for Character development, he can be evil/good/regreting his past/satisfied with his revenge.

Need to change the synopsis and put the tags!!! Need to change the synopsis and put the tags!!! Need to change the synopsis and put the tags!!! Need to change the synopsis and put the tags!!!