The writing quality is good and doesn't break immersion. Stability of updates seems to be varying from once a day to once every four days, hence the low rating. Story development seems fine, everything is slowly introduced and there is no abruptness. Unable to judge character design so far, the only flaw I have seen in the MC is how quickly he got over his grief. World background is fine but a little lacking.
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