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We are talking about how he killed eight people, right? 😂
When he didn't even have powers before!? Maybe they are in a cult😅
If it's that guy, I ain't surprised. It's always about family
😂 in what universe!?
Don't support your brother when he wants to kill someone you dummy.
Great, it's time to take over the world 😅
It's like he didn't even kill eight people sometime ago 😂
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😂 hey, if you want to fix him you are free to shatter reality and do so
Do you mean Callium as in a correction? Because the name Callum exists. If you are asking about it in the paragraph, he never got impaled by a fist
I have to say first and foremost that there are some grammatical errors and some issues with the type of narrative. Though I have to also say the the story was interesting to me and funny at the same time. I enjoyed the novel and I really want to know where it is headed. Hope things get better along the line
I have actually just gotten through the first three chapters and I have to say, the MC is really one selfish dude. Plus on top of that he wants to rule the world 😂. I will have to say, I am looking forward to seeing how this story goes. Probably he might improve as a human being later on. I also wish for the grammatical errors to be fixed author, but you have my 5 stars