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Mark_Tyler_0762

Mark_Tyler_0762

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2022-05-07 JoinedGlobal
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to Nickjr321

    Your welcome 😁

    Ch 14 Fiancees come first
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Commented

    This chapter makes me feel very curious. Can't wait to see what happens.

    Ch 1 I Said No
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    Alicole Chronicles: Unexpected Quest Duo
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to Vendredi_Martin

    We are talking about how he killed eight people, right? 😂

    "Seriously?!" When confused within faded away, Darvin yelled. "That's fucking awesome!"
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to Vendredi_Martin

    When he didn't even have powers before!? Maybe they are in a cult😅

    "Seriously?!" When confused within faded away, Darvin yelled. "That's fucking awesome!"
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to BLACK_GLOOM

    If it's that guy, I ain't surprised. It's always about family

    "Oh. Okay."
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to BLACK_GLOOM

    😂 in what universe!?

    "Oh. Okay."
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Posted

    I have to say, I have being enjoying the novel so far. It is funny, with the behavior of the MC being somewhat strange and unique. Sure, there are grammatical errors and some unnecessary repetitions here and there, but the story so far has kept me hooked. Hope things continue to go along nicely.

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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Commented

    Hmm, I guess I will skip school and appear in a forest as well 😂

    Ch 8 Duel
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Commented

    Don't support your brother when he wants to kill someone you dummy.

    "Oh. Okay."
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Commented

    Great, it's time to take over the world 😅

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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Commented

    It's like he didn't even kill eight people sometime ago 😂

    "Seriously?!" When confused within faded away, Darvin yelled. "That's fucking awesome!"
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to Verbonic_Comics

    Thanks I really appreciate it. This makes me feel kinda good in a weird way 😂

    Ch 14 Bughouse
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to INVRLied

    🤣

    "I am really a loser after all", Ryder rubbed his hair in circles.
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to INVRLied

    😂 hey, if you want to fix him you are free to shatter reality and do so

    "No, that isn't it. I don't want you to have some kind of obligation to do this. I want you to actually want me", Ryder explained as he gradually recovered from the assault.
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to Rabbitt436

    Do you mean Callium as in a correction? Because the name Callum exists. If you are asking about it in the paragraph, he never got impaled by a fist

    The Cree in front of him opened his eyes grabbing hold of Maverick as quick as he could before pulling him in. This resulted in Maverick getting impaled with the Leading undead's fist to his dismay.
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to Notion_Theory

    Hmm, if you say so. All in all though, thank you for the review

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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to INVRLied

    Technically you wouldn't be wrong if you call him a beta MC right now. Though things change in time, right now he is trying to get the hang of things. Hope you understand. Anyways thanks for the review 😁

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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Replied to AliceUwU

    😂 I understand the feeling. I will do my best to make it worst by making the novel much more interesting. Thanks for the review, appreciate it

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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Posted

    I have to say first and foremost that there are some grammatical errors and some issues with the type of narrative. Though I have to also say the the story was interesting to me and funny at the same time. I enjoyed the novel and I really want to know where it is headed. Hope things get better along the line

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    The Savage Beast (dropped, for The Sword Sovereign)
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  • Mark_Tyler_0762
    Mark_Tyler_07621yr
    Posted

    I have actually just gotten through the first three chapters and I have to say, the MC is really one selfish dude. Plus on top of that he wants to rule the world 😂. I will have to say, I am looking forward to seeing how this story goes. Probably he might improve as a human being later on. I also wish for the grammatical errors to be fixed author, but you have my 5 stars

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